Decision

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Weighted Armor Used

Lord Grinite had completed his first stage of training. The first stage of training consisted of wearing weighted armour and looking like a complete dork, whil doing 50 rather hard push ups, and 100 rather hard, I know, as well sit ups. Then powering up to Lord Grinite’s greatest transformation yet. False Super Saiyan. “Not long until I become a true Super Saiyan, this new transformation I have accomplished is not even a 1 hundredth of a true Super Saiyans power, so that is why I must train harder and harder every day until I have pushed my self to my full limits, and that wont be until I have become a Legendary Super Saiyan” Lord Grinite said as he walked out of the training bunker. “Now, may I borrow Makuta for some training?” Lord Grinite asked the super computer. “Sure you can Grinite, just go back into the training room and the Icer Makuta will be waiting for you in there, good luck” The super computers voice informed the egger Lord Grinite. “Thank you” Lord Grinite replied. “Oh the armour” Lord Grinite said as he noticed the armour that was still strapped around Lord Grinite as hard as it was before. “Better take it off for another day, don’t want to take it into battle with me” Lord Grinite said. Lord Grinite threw the weighted armour back into the chest it was in when Lord Grinite had found it. “Wow, you look just like Frieza” Lord Grinite said to the Icer named Makuta, he then remembered the horrible Frieza who had control over Lord Grinite’s race, the Saiyans. “Shut up and fight” Makuta, the Icer said to Lord Grinite the Saiyan. “First things first punk, don’t tell me to shut up, secondly, yes I do want to fight, but that still doesn’t mean you can tell me to shut up” Lord Grinite informed the Icer named Makuta. Makuta darted at Lord Grinite, the Icer sent a punch to the gut of Lord Grinite. This punch had landed, but Lord Grinite had time to re taliate. Lord Grinite grabbed the arm of the Icer Makuta and snapped it off like a twig. “No way” Makuta, the Icer said. “Yes way” Lord Grinite laughed. Lord Grinite sent a punch at the Icer, Makuta’s head. The Icer dodged and grabbed Lord Grinite’s arm and tried to rip it off. “No, my arms are not as delicate as yours are……AHHH!” Lord Grinite screamed. The robot had got Lord Grinite into a very painful arm lock. Lord Grinite tried and tried to escape, but it was no good, every time Lord Grinite tried to budge his arm back, the Icer Makuta just tightened the grip on Lord Grinite’s arm. “Co…met…Gal…i!” Lord Grinite stuttered. He used his new signature move to break free of this hold. A massive Comet came and bolted down Makuta the Icer/robot. While this was happening, Lord Grinite broke his arm free and pulled the comet off the robot Icer named Makuta. Makuta quickly got back up and tried to get Lord Grinite into that same arm lock again. “Same tricks huh?” Lord Grinite asked, then laughed. “That wont work this time Makuta” Lord Grinite assured the Icer Makuta. Lord Grinite got behind Makuta and kicked him in his robot spine, then got in front of him and took his head of with a karate punch. “You were a good training exercise Makuta, thank you” Lord Grinite said to the malfunctioning head of the Icer/robot Makuta.

Lord Grinite walked out of the room and told the super computer of Lord Grinite’s fight with the Icer/robot Makuta. “Well, very good now Grinite, but, you do know that there is only 12 hours in a day here on Planet Namek so you must get everything done quickly, understand?” The super computer told Lord Grinite of the hours in a day here on Planet namek. “What? Only 12 hours? No way” Lord Grinite moaned. “Well, it is different then Planet Earth, ready for a mission?” The super computer asked the moaning and sulky Lord Grinite. “Yup, what mission is it?” Lord Grinite asked the super computer. Lord Grinite wasn’t sulky and moaning any more. He was cheerful and exuberant. “Well, that was a big change in mood swings Grinite. But any way, a Namekian man named Dens needs your help. He needs to be transported from right down the road, through the wasteland, to the other side of town” The super computer told Lord Grinite of his mission. “Easy peezy lemon squeezy” Lord Griinite said. “But there is a catch, he wants you to escort him there with no casualties” The super computer said. “But how can there be any casualties?” Lord Grinite asked. “Well, you are going through the rough wasteland, which is full of bandits who kill any one who passes” The super computer told Lord Grinite of these casualties. “Oh, just like Planet Earth then huh?” Lord Grinite asked. “Well you must get going now, he will be waiting just down the road at the gate entrance to the rough wasteland” The super computer told Lord Grinite. “Alright, I am off, thanks super computer, but before I go, do you have a name?” Lord Grinite asked if the super computer had a name. “No, I just go by S-C, which stands for super computer, now go or he will be angry” The super computer with the initials, SC said to the leaving Lord Grinite.

Lord Grinite walked out the door and rushed down the street as he did the day before. He was running so fast because he didn’t want to disappoint the waiting Namekian man. One first bad impression and that is how someone see’s you the time next, and the time after that and the time after that. So you need a good impression to make it far. Lord Grinite saw the man waiting down at the gate now and slowed down, he would need to save his energy for the bandits he would surely have to fight. Fighting alone against weak bandits is one thing, but fighting bandits while protecting a fellow Namekian is another. Lord Grinite was hoping that the Namekian could fight for himself for a bit, as the super computer in the facility said that there are masses and masses of bandits lurking in the wasteland, and they ought to be stronger then human bandits because they are Namekians, and the Namekian race has one speciality of fighting and warriors, and if you’re a Namekian bandit, you must be a warrior/fighting Namekian if you are a bandit. Lord Grinite walked up to the man. “Hello there I am Grinite, I am here to protect you on your venture through the rough wastelands I hear” Lord Grinite said to the man. “Yes, hello Grinite, my name is Hil, I can hold my own against most of the bandits, but I don’t like venturing into the rough wastelands alone, as the bandits appear from any where, any time” Hil said to Lord Grinite. “Right, I understand, I would probably feel the same if I were in your situation” Lord Grinite said to Hil. “Ok, about ten kilometres down the rough wasteland track is a gate, that leads in to the other part of town, then after that I will be fine, but if it wouldn’t be to much trouble would you be able to come and collect me on my way back?” Hil asked Lord Grinite after he said about the rough wasteland track and the gate. “Sure, just give me a buzz on this device and I will be over be fore you can say ‘Roger Roger’” Lord Grinite told Hil. “Thank you” Hil replied to Lord Grinite.

Lord Grinite opened the gate and lead the way down the track. Lord Grinite was getting prepared for any sudden movements, as that would probably mean that there were bandits closing in on Lord Grinite and Hil. Lord Grinite heard something, and said, “I know you are there, so come here and I will deal with you” Lord Grinite said to the person who was responsible for the sudden movement. No one came out, so Lord Grinite and Hil carried on there journey to the other side of the town Lord Grinite and Hil just came from. Lord Grinite suddenly felt a sharp pain in his back and before he knew it he was on the ground with a very sore back. “What was that?” Lord Grinite asked. “Who did that?” Lord Grinite asked again. Lord Grinite turned over and looked at the man standing over him, brushing the dust off his boot. “IT WAS YOU!” Lord Grinite yelled. “No shit it was me you dork” Hil replied, Hil ripped off the suit he was wearing, under it was a human dressed in black. “Remember when you fought my grand father and killed him, then took his Black Starred Dragon Ball and left his dead corpse to be found by me the day after? Huh?” The furious human asked. “My real name is Sage, and I have been working with the bandits of this Planet to track you down and get my revenge!” Sage yelled. Sage was the grand son of the Mage that Lord Grinite had killed back on Planet Earth three days ago. “So what, he said that he was the strongest Mage alive, and if you are a Mage that means you are weaker then him, but if he were to be lying and you are the strongest Mage alive it doesn’t even matter because I am the Saiyan Lord Grinite and I have some news for ya, I have gotten a lot stronger in those three days. Your grandfather was quite a challenge but you will just be childs play you stupid boy!” Lord Grinite said to the Grand Son of the Mage and then laughed. “Yes, I am weaker then my grand father, but I have the bandits I brought along with me, and the Namekian bandits, what do you have to say to that?” The Mage named Sage asked.

Out of nowhere, about one hundred bandits, Human and Namekian, jumped from the cliffs beside the wasteland and landed on the ground, surrounding Lord Grinite. “Now, time for fun Sage and friends” Lord Grinite chuckled at his own joke. “ASTEROID…..BOMBER!” Lord Grinite yelled, he jumped back into the air and used his ki to make donuts around Sage’s arms and legs, making it unable for him to move. Then, one mother of a Asteroid came out of the sky and fell onto the circle of bandits and Sage. Lord Grinite watched as every single one of the pathetic bandits were crushed to their deaths. “Well, it is better for them to be dead then alive, because a life of being a low life scum bag bandit is really no life at all. Lord Grinite walked back the way he came, back to the research facility to get the low down on what to do next. Lord Grinite reached the gate and opened it and walked casually through the street until he was back at the Research Facility. Lord Grinite was walking this time because there was no need to rush. Lord Grinite reached the door and opened it, the door led in to the Research Facility. “That was quick Grinite, how did it go?” The super computer asked Lord Grinite. “It went ok, well I mean that the guy I was suppost to be helping turned on me and worked with the bandits to kill me, so I had to take them all out in one go” Lord Grinite told the Super Computer as he walked into his bedroom. “Maybe I should watch some television” Lord Grinite said. Lord Grinite lay on his bed and flicked through the pathetic human channels. “Ergh, nothing is on, this sucks” Lord Grinite said. Lord Grinite lay on his side and went to sleep, he has had a big day, he did some training, beat up a machine, got his arm nearly broken by a machine and fought a traitor and some bandits, so over all, you have got to say it was a kind of rough day. Lord Grinite was now sleeping. Sleeping is a good thing, and a bad thing, the good things are that you are getting the rest you need and are re fueling your energy, and you can let your imagination run wild, but the bad thing is that that if you let your imagination run to its limit, there is nothing else to think about, so night mares and other scary things intrude your mind while you are sleeping, and give you an un comfortable experience while getting the rest.

Dream

Lord Grinite was having a good comfortable experience in this dream, instead of a horrible un comfortable experience that he had the night before. Lord Grinite was in a forest some where on Planet Earth. He was standing up in a throne talking to many followers. Lord Grinite was thinking that he must be finally a Legendary Super Saiyan, the followers were Saiyans, Icers and Namekians. They were cheering at Lord Grinite’s every word. Lord Grinite must be talking about his plans for universe domination. Lord Grinite was then laughing as a Tuffle army in truded on the base of Lord Grinite. Lord Grinite commanded. “Get them!”. Lord Grinite’s army ran at the Tuffle army and some pulled out weapons. The Lord Grinite army was obliterating the army of the Tuffle warriors. Lord Grinite was still laughing as his men were slaughtering the in truders from New Planet Tuffle. Finally only one Tuffle warrior was left. “Stop! I will take this ones life my self” Lord Grinite said to his army. Lord Grinite stood up and pointed the palm of his hand at the Tuffle’s head. “Why did you attack my army?” Lord Grinite asked the surviving Tuffle warrior. “We thought we might have a chance if we got you with a sneak attack” The Tuffle warrior replied. “A sneak attack, are you kidding you dum fool?” Lord Grinite asked as he laughed. The rest of his army laughed as well. When Lord Grinite had had enough of laughing he commanded “Silence!” To his army. His army stopped laughing at once. “Now, time to die” Lord Grinite said as his warriors moved out of the way in time for Lord Grinite to get to shot his ki beam at the Tuffle warrior opponent, and take his measly life. Lord Grinite sent the ki beam and it pierced through the skin of the Tuffle warrior, and in to his heart. Lord Grinite laughed and then said, “Dispose of the bodies and Elite Squadron, get into your space pods and join the fight on Planet Frieza, I want you to get more Changlings here for training at once!”. The universe must be at war, with Lord Grinite as the leading War Lord. The present day Lord Grinite would do any thing for this power, and this dream has motivated the present day Lord Grinite to go further. The men of the Elite Squadron got into their pods and raced into space. The Tuffles must be the main threat, as more and more future scientists are being born on New Planet Tuufle, new cy borg Bio logical Tuffles are being created, and that’s what poses as a threat for the future war lord of the universe, the greatest to ever live Saiyan, Lord Grinite. Lord Grinite was walking in the forest the day after Lord Grinite had killed the Tuffle’s and had sent the Elite Squad to Planet Frieza to help in the battles. The scene then changed to Planet Frieza, it looked like every race in the universe had turned up for this bout. The Namekians, Saiyans, Icers and Humans had teamed up with Lord Grinite. The Namekians, Saiyans and Icers and the Humans had their own army, but had sent their Elite’s to Lord Grinite for training. These Elite’s were used for full combat missions, then sent back to their race army in ex change for more Elite warriors. Once the fully trained warriors had been sent back from Lord Grinite, the army’s would send them on missions with the weaker warriors, as they were monsters on the battle field. Taking the breathe out of every last one of the opponents. “This is incredible” The present day Lord Grinite said to him self while he was watching this dream.

Dream Ended

Lord Grinite had just woken up. “I must make that dream a reality, some day, but before that I need to get some training and fight my own smaller wars. I have just teamed up with the U.C.A. The United Changling Alliance. I am yet to meet my team members. But apparently on Earth there are a team named the Z Fighters. My team, the U.C.A are rivals to them. So I need to get stronger so I can help my team to victory and protect my fellow team members. Also, I must get back to Planet Earth soon or the Demons will take over the Planet. Zagan, I will defeat him” Lord Grinite said to him self. Lord Grinite got out of bed and put his armour on, ready for another big day of training, fighting robots and probably a mission. Lord Grinite walked out of the room and turned on the Super Computer who had helped him in many ways. “Mornin” Lord Grinite said to the just awoken Super Computer. “Oh good morning Grinite, are you going to do some training?” The super computer asked. “Yes I am, I should get going now, I am going to train harder then ever!” Lord Grinite shouted. “What brought that on?” The super computer asked. “Oh, a perfect dream” Lord Grinite replied. “See you in a couple of hours S C” Lord Grinite said using the super computers initials S C. Lord Grinite walked out of the super computer room and into the training room. He opened the chest and pulled out the training armour. Lord Grinite then strapped the buckles of the weighted armour to Lord Grinite’s armour, then did 100 press ups. This wasn’t enough today, Lord Grinite thought that he could to one hundred more, so, that’s what Lord Grinite did. Lord Grinite’s arms were a little bit tired now so he decided to do some leg exercises. Sit ups to be specific, sit ups were good because it works out you abs and your thighs, but Lord Grinite didn’t need abs, because he al ready had abs, but it was a good warm up exercise. Lord Grinite did five hundred sit ups because that was the right amount at the moment or else Lord Grinite would put his back out of place, and you can’t become a universe global power Lord if your back is out of place. Lord Grinite stood up and took off the weighted armour. “That was a good exercise, now, I might see what Heihachi is made of today, but I will just call him H, because Heihachi is quite a long name to pro nounce. Lord Grinite went into the lab area and picked Heihachi as his training exercise. H followed Lord Grinite into the training room. “You are still a long way away from my power Lord Grinite, so if I am going to hard on you I can stop for today. Dr Goli programmed me to be so strong that I would be the ultimate challenge for me, I am currently the strongest cy borg to walk this Universe, so please be cautious of my power” H in formed Lord Grinite. “Ok, so lets get started” Lord Grinite said to H, the ultimate challenge. Lord Grinite dashed at H and sent a massive combo of punches and kicks al mixed up to confuse H, then if this succeeded, Lord Grinite would upper cut him to the sky. But Lord Grinite was not successful, this did not happen, but what did happen was that H grabbed Lord Grinite’s leg while he tried to upper cut, after blocking all those attacks. H then pulled Lord Grinite in to the air and punched him in the stomach, and power bombed him to the ground. “This isn’t wrestling school H!” Lord Grinite said as he went flying to wards the hard ground. Lord Grinite landed on his back quite hard. Lord Grinite only said to H that this wasn’t wrestling school because H power bombed him, which is a common move used by wrestlers. Lord Grinite enjoyed watching wrestling, as the WWE always had good story lines. Lord Grinite tried his hardest to get him self back on to his feet, but he couldn’t, so he flew into the air. “I can’t beat you with my base power so I might just transform, into some thing I like to call, ‘False Super Saiyan!’” Lord Grinite yelled. “You will still be far beyond my strength Lord Grinite” H in sured Lord Grinite. Lord Grinite powered up into his strongest form and then rushed at H. He sent some very fast and correctly timed punches at H, but they were all fruit less. H seemed to block every one of these attempts. Lord Grinite couldn’t hold this power for long, so he powered down and fell face first on to the ground. “This fight is over” H said as he picked up Lord Grinite and took him to the healing machine. H set up the healing machine and attached the pipes to in jured places on Lord Grinite’s body. Before long Lord Grinite was back up and running like a freight train.

“Did I lose?” Lord Grinite asked H. “Yes you did, but you fought well, now go and get your mission done and get back to training, you have a long future a head of you Lord Grinite” H said to Lord Grinite as he took the pipes off his body. Lord Grinite got up and waved at H as he re entered the robot lab. Lord Grinite walked back through to the super computer room and the S C said. “You fought well, Heihachi’s power level is 3, 456, 873, 001” The S C told Lord Grinite. “Wow, now my mission S C” Lord Grinite asked the S C. “Well I want to test your evading skills, you must enter the training room and get a crystal that is placed in the middle, but I will have the walls of the training room set up that the walls will shoot paint balls at you, get hit 5 times and your out” The S C said to Lord Grinite. “Ok” Lord Grinite replied as he re entered the training room. Lord Grinite then ran at the crystal, evading the paint balls that were coming from all directions. He got hit twice before he reached the crystal, he quickly re covered it and then he had to get back with out getting shot 3 times. Lord Grinite did this successfully and then walked out of the training room and put the crystal on the table. “Well done Lord Grinite, would you like another mission?” The S C asked Lord Grinite. “No thank you S C, I have to get back to Planet Earth, really, thanks for every thing, I will come back some day soon!” Lord Grinite said as he ran out of the door and back down the road, looking for a safe place to set up his space pod. Lord Grinite went down to the clearing and set up the pod, then got in and set the co ordinates for Planet Earth. “Planet Earth, here I come! Again!” Lord Grinite shouted as he closed the space pod door and the space pod was air borne. “Alright, next stop Planet Earth, then after that Planet Vegeta to discover my origins” Lord Grinite said as he chuckled as what he said.

I did not copy this. I have truly made this in the last few weeks. The reason my character is 'Lord Grinite' is because that when I started this, it was for my old site, then it died, this was created and I changed my character.

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PL: 51,000
Zenni: 51,000

Subject: Re: Decision Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:14 am

This really is an excellent topic, but isnt 51,000 way to much O.o

4,045 words impressive

Subject: Re: Decision Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:39 pm

i have to agree with Vergil, its only 4,045 so that means that a 1,000 word post should be getting each of us about 10,000 PL, as long as it is to the same RP skill (round about)

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I used Weighted Armor...

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Lord Grinite had finally landed on the planet of the Namekian warriors, and healers and guardians, Planet Namek. Planet Namek was beautiful place, people would often say about Planet Earth being a beautiful Planet, which it was, but Planet Earth could never match the breathe taking scenery that this Planet holds. Lord Grinite never usually gasps and says that something is beautiful, very rarely does he do that, but this was a rare occasion and he did gasp at the lovely scenery that Planet Namek held. Lord Grinite stood up and got out of his Saiyan space pod. He flicked the switch on the side and it turned back into its normal capsule form. Lord Grinite always thought that capsule’s were a great invention because massive things that weigh a lot could just be carried around like a feather, their even smaller then a feather. Lord Grinite reached into his pocket and took out his little Capsule case, something that holds capsule’s and put the space pod capsule back into the case. He closed the lid and on the lid the letters spoke ‘Capsule Corp.’. Capsule Corp was a company that makes Dyna Capsule’s, the capsule’s that are held in Lord Grinite’s case that are held in his pocket are Dyna Capsule’s. Made by the brilliant scientist Dr Briefs. Lord Grinite walked into the nearest village to ask someone for directions to the facility in one of the village’s placed on Planet Namek. Lord Grinite was told about a training facility on Planet Namek by Dr Gori, a great scientist who lives on Lord Grinite’s home called Planet Earth. Apparently, Dr Gori sends his robots over here for finishing touches by a Namekian scientist who studied on Planet Earth named Fuyo. Lord Grinite was heading to see Fuyo, for some training and directions to the next Black Star Dragon Ball location. Lord Grinite entered the village and saw a whole crowd of green men with long antenna’s. These Namekians were either working or roaming. “This can’t be real” Lord Grinite said, he started punching himself in the head trying to wake himself up because he thought he was dreaming. Lord Grinite didn’t think that green men with long antenna’s could be real. “Can I help you?” A Namekian man came up and asked the still punching himself in the head Lord Grinite. “Are you real?” Grinite asked. “Huh?” The looking confused Namekian replied. “Of course I am real you rude human!” The offended Namekian shouted. “Sorry I didn’t mean to be rude, I have just never met green men with antenna’s” Lord Grinite replied.

“Yeah, well we are an unusual sight, most travellers say that” The Namekian said to Lord Grinite. “Oh and I am a Saiyan, not a human” Lord Grinite informed the friendly Namekian who was ready to help Lord Grinite out. “A Saiyan warrior huh, what business do you have here then?” The Namekian asked Lord Grinite. “Well, my name is Grinite and I am looking for the Black Starred Dragon Balls, also I am here to see Fuyo” Lord Grinite told the Namekian. “So your looking for the Black Starred Dragon Balls and your name is Grinite and you’re a Saiyan warrior and your looking for Fuyo, well my name is Khak Grinite, nice to meet you” The Namekian named Khak told The Saiyan Lord named Lord Grinite. “So where can I find Fuyo Khak?” Lord Grinite asked The Namekian named Khak. “His facility is down the road, just there” The Namekian named Khak pointed at the direction of the facility. “Alright, thanks for your help Khak” Lord Grinite thanked the Namekian name Khak who had helped Lord Grinite out a lot. “Good luck with your quest to find the Dragon Balls Saiyan warrior named Grinite” The Namekian named Khak said to Lord Grinite. Lord Grinite was so excited that he was actually sprinting down the crowded road full of Namekians. “Slow down you maniac traveller” Lots of Namekians called out to the dashing Lord Grinite. Lord Grinite finally stopped at the entrance to the facility. He walked in. Lord Grinite looked around, he saw that this facility wasn’t as flash as the one on Planet Earth, but it was good enough. Lord Grinite walked up to the Namekian working there. “Hello, I am Grinite, I was told by Dr Goli to come here for some training” Lord Grinite said to the man. “Grinite Grinite, GRINATE! Dr Goli told me that you were coming, I am Fuyo” Fuyo told Lord Grinate. “Ahuh” Lord Grinite replied. “I am sure you know what to do for your training here don’t you? Because you will have to do it yourself” Fuyo told Lord Grinite. “You won’t be supervising my training?” Lord Grinite asked the Namekian. “I can’t my dear boy, I need to go to Planet Yadrat to pick up some technology” Fuyo told Lord Grinite. “I betta be going now, I will see you in a couple of days” Fuyo told Lord Grinite. “Well bye I guess” The surprised Lord Grinite said to the leaving Fuyo. Fuyo walked out the door and got into a space craft. “I have to do everything by my self huh?” Lord Grinite asked himself.

Lord Grinite put his hand on the hand scanner and started up the computer. “Welcome Grinite” A voice welcomed Lord Grinite. The voice then read,

Grinite
Grinite is a Saiyan
Grinite has 63, 581 Power level

“Cool” Lord Grinite said. Grinite opened the sliding doors and four robots were standing in front of him. These robots looked like real people, in stead of looking like robots. That’s why Dr Goli said he sends his robots here for finishing touches. “Why do these robots look like real people” Lord Grinite asked the computer. “Because, they give better results Grinite” The super computers voice said in its usual strange, unusual way. “Oh” Lord Grinite replied. “Would you like to see the rest Grinite” The super computers voice asked Lord Grinite. “Yeah, why not” Lord Grinite replied. Lord Grinite walked into the training room, this training room was more complex then the other ones on Planet Earth at Dr Goli’s research facility. “These are your training robots, I will read out what each of them are capable of, there qualities and there race and power level” the super computers voice told Lord Grinite.

Huichi
Huichi is a Legendary Saiyan
Huichi has 1, 765, 874, 000 Power Level

Zex
Zex is a Human
Zex has 6,000 Power Level

Gugi
Gugi is a Tuffle
Gugi has 200 Power Level

Makuta
Makuta is an Icer
Makuta has 70,987 Power Level

Heihachi
Heihachi is a Saiyan
Heihachi has 561, 643 Power Level
“Huh, Heihachi?” Lord Grinite asked after the super computer had read out and showed the status of the robots intended for training. “Yes, Heihachi was sent from Dr Goli’s laboratory here for completion, we will be receiving more of his creations in a couple of days” The super computers voice informed Lord Grinite. “Ok, I am going to get some sleep, I have just been in a tiring space pod for the last three days, I was really worried about crashing into something so I stayed up the whole time, no rest, no sleep” Lord Grinite said. “That is perfectly under standable Grinite, I will shut myself down now, have a good rest” The super computers voice wished Lord Grinite a good sleep. “Night” Lord Grinite said as he walked into the very flash room that he was staying in. Inside was a T.V, a computer, a bed, a duchess and two lamps. “Time for sleep” Lord Grinite said as he took off his armour and got into bed. Lord Grinite would usually have good dreams, but this one, was a horror themed dream.

Dream

Lord Grinite was walking through a small desert on Planet Vegeta. He knew this one must be about his history on Planet Vegeta. Two men where closing in on Lord Grinite, Lord Grinite sent attacks at these approaching Saiyan men who were after Lord Grinite’s life. “Stay back” Lord Grinite commanded the Saiyan warriors. “Or what you little squirt” One of the Saiyans said to Lord Grinite. Lord Grinite looked at himself from the front, since this dream was third person, he wasn’t Lord Grinite, he was watching himself, instead of controlling himself. Lord Grinite had just noticed that he was a small child, at the most 8 or 9. Lord Grinite watched himself as he sent a punch at the approaching Saiyans. The Saiyan that Lord Grinite attacked grabbed Lord Grinite’s hand and crushed it. The bones in Lord Grinite’s hand all broke, with a side dish of an ear piercing scream from the in pain Lord Grinite. The older Lord Grinite, who was sleeping and watching the younger version of himself get beaten to a pulp, jumped into his dream. Now there were two Lord Grinite’s, one a small boy and one an older version, the present version, not the past, the present. The present version of Lord Grinite jumped at the attacking Saiyan warriors, he sent a punch to the head of the biggest Saiyan. Lord Grinite’s fist went right through the Saiyans head. “Whaaa?” Lord Grinite asked himself. “You must watch your self feel the pain and suffering boy” A voice from out of no where called. “Who are you, where are you?” Lord Grinite asked the voice. “I am a voice from your soul, would you like to know why I am making you watch this horrible pain and sorrow clip from your dreams?” The voice asked Lord Grinite. “Why are you?” Lord Grinite asked. “Do you not know? How sad. I am showing you because this is the exact same horrible pain that the ones you killed, and there families have experienced, what you are seeing right now is the pain of the good souls that you have perished from the face of the galaxy! It is wrong to take people’s live’s like that you ungrateful little maggot, don’t you see that?” The voice asked. “If you are a part of my soul, then your alignment must be evil, in battle I show evil character-ristics, in real life situations I show respect for others, so you cant be part of my soul, I am a Saiyan and I show pride and promise for battling, I live for battling and show no mercy, and don’t regret my actions, so you cant be part of my soul, NOW GET OUT OF MY HEAD!” Lord Grinite shouted at the voice in Lord Grinite’s head. The voice didn’t make another appearance in the dream of Lord Grinite so he knew that he must have scared him off. Lord Grinite was ready to awaken now, so that’s what he did.

End of Dream

Lord Grinite had now awaken from sleeping mode and was ready for action. He got up out of bed and put his Saiyan armour back on, ready for another day off excitement and enthusiasm. “Maybe some relaxed training first would be good” Lord Grinite said to himself. Lord Grinite walked out the door of his luxury room and turned the super compute back on. “How was your sleep Grinite?” The voice on the super computer asked Lord Grinite. “Superb, except for an unusual voice that pissed me off” Lord Grinite replied. “Would you like to use a robot for your training sir Grinite?” The super computer asked Lord Grinite. “Not right yet, I just need some relaxed training to start me off” Lord Grinite replied. Lord Grinite walked into the training room. “Now to find some weighted armour” Lord Grinite said. Lord Grinite found a chest and rummaged through all the gear in there looking for some weighted armour. “Bingo” Lord Grinite said as he found some weighted armour and put it on. “Whoa, quite heavy” Lord Grinite said as he heaved it over his head and strapped the straps onto his other armour. Lord Grinite started with some press ups. “Fifty would be a good amount” Lord Grinite said. He started his press ups. Without the armour Lord Grinite would probably be able to do about 500 press ups, but with the armour on it would be quite hard to do that without breaking your back, so Lord Grinite lowered it down to fifty. Lord Grinite did the press ups with ease, mostly ease but some of it was rather difficult. Lord Grinite then got up and sat on his ass and lied down. “Wattya about one hundred sit ups, that would be a good amount also” Lord Grinite said. Lord Grinite started his sits ups. These were a lot harder then just doing normal press ups, and Lord Grinite had weighted armour on, so he had to stop at around 50 for a break. “This is tiring, but I cannot give up just yet, I have to get stronger” Lord Grinite said. Lord Grinite finally did the sit ups and stood up. “Now to test out my power” Lord Grinite said. “HAAAAAA!” Lord Grinite shouted. His power was over flowing, he knew that he had hidden potential some where, and he had to dig it out at all costs. Lord Grinite’s aura changed colour. His hair changed colour and his eye balls went into the back of his head. Lord Grinite’s hair got a small tint of red in it. His aura changed colour, it was now a bright gold. Lord Grinite knew that he couldn’t sustain this power for long, so he powered down to his base state. “That’s incredible, now for phase two” Lord Grinite laughed.

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Subject: Re: Decision Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:23 am

You know, the thing is.
If you and i get such amount, then we basically screwed all other players, since they got like 1,000 to 9,000 for their topics, it;s just not fair.

So i suggest a re-grade for all training topics to even the scores.
Because people are complaining about leaving, and i noticed most grader's (including myself) where not aware of this grading system, thus why i responded here earlier, saying "This really is an excellent topic, but isnt 51,000 way to much O.o
4,045 words impressive".

So i suggest a re-grading to happen VERY soon, or people will start leaving, i can tell you that.

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Get over it, people have to work for their boosts. It will be just the same as if I had 5 mil and people joined...

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stripes2145 landed on namek to look for nail. he look around and saw Freza. [But how could this be !] Goku killed him,the planet explode .Oh well, looks like i have to stop him . It different now .I am stronger than him.Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Take this destrodisc!! One shot is all it took. How ? why was I not able to sense your power. Goodbye Freza once and for all. Now then looks like i have to find the dragonballs and wish everyone back to life. Dragon i summon you ! what is your wish . Bring everyone back to life. Your wish is granted . What is your second wish .Make the nameks stronger than Freza. Very well. What is your third wish. Take me to Nail. Your wish is granted. I bid you farewell. Nail ,Piccolo wants you to fuse with him. No. How about i fight you and if I win you fuse with Piccolo. And if I win ? Y our not going to win .Yaaaaaaaaaa! stripes knees Nail in the gut .With one blow Nail fell. Okay you win. so stripes and Nail went back to earth.Nail fused with Piccolo.Looks like i did my job says stripes2145 to himself.

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you need to make a character first stripes